Thursday, September 11, 2014


I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.

I ran to the door next and I opened the I ran in the house.

because I  got  lost in the forest.  
next I found the food in the  house
it small like chocolate, then he Went to dad’s beD, he Went to lie down it was to hard  ,next he Went to mums  bed it  was too  soft he fell  on  the floor .next he Went to baby bears  bed and he lay down
in the bed, he was asleep on the bed.
the next  day the 3 bears  came back to the house,
then  they  open  the  door look at  the
dad is bowi

File:Goldilocks and the 3

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