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Thursday, August 30, 2018

point England poem

I woke up on a sunny day

 I went to school and had a funny day

I played rugby and it was very rough

I got bumped off but i was tough

Then i went to church and i prayed

Then I go to church every Sunday.

This poem was made with the help of Tevita
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4 comments:

  1. LeoSeptember 3, 2018 at 10:51 AM

    Talofa Toni, I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem.I like how you put daily things and included them into your work . My advice to you would to not use the same words over and over but other then that keep it up.

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  2. Petesa @ PESSeptember 3, 2018 at 8:40 PM

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  3. Tevita September 4, 2018 at 10:36 AM

    Hey Toni!!!I really loved reading your poem and the way you put all your words in the right place and made them rhyme. I was glad to help you in this poem but maybe next time for a challenge you could try and make your own without any help :) , amazing work looking forward to more great work.

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  4. TupuiaSeptember 4, 2018 at 10:41 AM

    Hello Toni, i liked your poem it was amazing i liked how you said "you are tough" keep up the great work.

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